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Confusion

by Jeffrey Parren

It is the rug being pulled
from under stable feet.

The punch caught blindside
when you thought you stood alone.

The 5% tip from customers
who are from this country.

The 35% tip from customers
who aren't from this country.

Waking up feeling great
after a drunken fiasco.

A rainy day picnic ruined
only for movie night romance.

Making the best of everything
even when it is difficult.

It is not my love for you...
I am not confused about that.

08/31/2007

Posted on 08/31/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/31/07 at 04:51 PM

I like the way you lay this out, especially in the third and fourth stanzas.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/31/07 at 05:28 PM

Great piece, well thought through.....

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/31/07 at 06:13 PM

good to have some stability amid the chaos

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/02/07 at 02:04 AM

It is life and you pretty much summed it up!

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