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topic: You asked for a scalpel and were given a machete

by Aaron Michael

delicate situations matter
not on size and shape
but whether they're attached
at the hand heart or head.

all may grip tight, but only one
knows how to let go, one
knows how say you should, and one
knows when you should.

it is never the same, nor
it is ever easy, and
knowing where to cut
does not always mean you can.

precision never matter more
and between you and i, and
the knife, no one can tell us
this won't hurt.

08/30/2007

Author's Note: topic from P. Lastovica

Posted on 08/30/2007
Copyright © 2024 Aaron Michael

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 08/31/07 at 12:43 AM

the last two stanzas are rock solid.
fav. lines

knowing where to cut
does not always mean you can.

- - lots of truth in this; the know-how is/should never enough to green light poor decisions. well handled, sir =)

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/31/07 at 01:33 PM

solid truth in here. i love the image of scalpel/machete in relation to the head, heart and hand.

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