Embracing the pressure
he grabbed for the sword
yet did not do so with force
but kneeled with admiration
and composure generated
his worth to become a man
and from then on everyone
he contacted embraced him.
Wonderful image. I get a mental photo of a knight, but I could be wrong. One tiny crit - "compusure" = composure (?). The form is solid, like a block, where it might represent the character of a man.
~Chelle~
