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On This August Night

by Jeffrey Parren

Rain wets the deck
damp flip-flops squeak
as they dance to the sound
of crickets shouting
with mouths closed
on this August night.

08/24/2007

Posted on 08/24/2007
Copyright © 2025 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/24/07 at 04:20 PM

lovely...though perhaps the second line could use a little work...damp flip-flops squeak?

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