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Lone woman (senryu)

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

Lone woman in heat
seeks cool guy for nightly fun.
Let's melt ice, baby!

08/21/2007

Author's Note: Personal ad by Michelle Angelini inspired this ripoff.

Posted on 08/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/21/07 at 11:50 PM

wonderfully funtastic.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/22/07 at 03:34 AM

Well, I'm glad there are more women than myself who are hot and lonely. I feel honored my haiku/ku of some kind inspired yours.
~Chelle~

Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/22/07 at 10:16 AM

smiles, this ad sure gets one imagination running! nice one!

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/22/07 at 02:07 PM

This definitely will attract a "cool guy"... nice word play-- hope you will join the "Tadpole Forum"!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/22/07 at 04:19 PM

hmmmm.... I enjoyed this....is it getting hot in here... or just under..... my collar???

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