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Nestea plunge
by A. Paige White
climbing quicksilver
launches a flowing twirl
a hurricane reels
08/20/2007 Author's Note: Originally trying for a heat haiku. Just gave up. I relate hurricanes with heat but I doubt anyone else would.
Posted on 08/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 08/21/07 at 12:26 PM Ah! Having experienced a couple of these, this surely shines vivdly for me....flowing, twirling, reeling... |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/21/07 at 03:07 PM heart pounding action. never seen a hurricane, but i've encountered a tornado or three. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/23/07 at 06:33 PM Quite descriptive! Sense the dramatic movement and trauma! |
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