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He brought a helmet

by Elizabeth Seago



I hope you found solace in her frigid arms.
Comfort in the kiss that sent us
Head first into a concrete slab of
Irreverence and unspoken truths.






08/19/2007

Posted on 08/20/2007
Copyright © 2025 Elizabeth Seago

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/20/07 at 02:59 PM

this has so many deeper things going in it. the simple few lines can be dissected a million different ways, every one of them a beautiful thought. amazing.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/20/07 at 04:28 PM

ouch. hope his helmet cracked under the pressure.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/08/08 at 02:51 PM

this is a wall of truth. i love it.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/07/10 at 06:55 PM

damn! hits like a bat swung by a home run hero

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