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that summer

by Peter Humphreys

there is a place
high in the dunes
where the sky
is
everywhere
unbounded
but
by
Earth
itself
and seaward
curving 'way
to broad
Atlantic roar
upon those dunes
we dipped
and rolled
with feet made light
by summer heat
and chased
and played
as swallows
and
as I sit now
a dismal 'lone
I can hear
the crashing foam
and feel
the spikes
upon my feet
of marram
tangled thistle
I can
feel
the wind whipped sand
and in mine
twisted
calloused
hands
I feel
your gentle breasts
when we made love
the first time
beneath
the skylark's
mocking gaze
and above
the curlews cry
my spark
may not
yet be
entirely spent
but
I will
always
touch
and feel
and
smell
the scent
of fires
we made
that
summer

08/18/2007

Posted on 08/18/2007
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Shaw on 08/18/07 at 09:43 PM

this is lovely - earthy tender as Neruda

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/18/07 at 11:09 PM

The presence, the loss, the strength of love is here enhanced by placement on the wild wave worn beach where "wind whipped" memories rise like the original fires. Yes. And the detail enhances, places that intensity of emotion, sets it as wildly present into the sand dunes now. The "marram" (wonderful palindromic word) and thistle "Atlantic" --the sounds of "skylark" and "curlew" --all these intricacies of setting give your poem power and immediacy.

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 08/19/07 at 11:17 PM

Earthy, slightly wistful, lovely words.

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