Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/18/07 at 11:09 PM The presence, the loss, the strength of love is here enhanced by placement on the wild wave worn beach where "wind whipped" memories rise like the original fires. Yes. And the detail enhances, places that intensity of emotion, sets it as wildly present into the sand dunes now. The "marram" (wonderful palindromic word) and thistle "Atlantic" --the sounds of "skylark" and "curlew" --all these intricacies of setting give your poem power and immediacy. |