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haiku (seashells)
by Pall Kvaranseashells in sand
flipped by the summertide
her ocean necklace
08/17/2007 Author's Note: Written by me and Frišrik Į. Frišriksson after a conversation about what the summer had changed.
Posted on 08/17/2007
Copyright © 2026 Pall Kvaran
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/18/07 at 01:24 AM This is quite wonderful. The "summertide" as kigo--I have never seen that and it is beautiful. The "flipped" gives an unusual and sensual motion to the haiku and "her ocean necklace" is delightfully suggestive. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/20/07 at 07:54 PM really beautiful and well crafted! well done... |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 09/02/07 at 10:51 PM I especially like the image created--well done! |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 01/08/12 at 10:35 PM I am shocked to find I marked this as a favourite poem but failed to leave any comment. This is a lovely haiku though I have nothing uniquqe to add to the comments above. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/01/13 at 09:36 PM Love this. You are so good at these! |
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