| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/18/07 at 01:24 AM This is quite wonderful. The "summertide" as kigo--I have never seen that and it is beautiful. The "flipped" gives an unusual and sensual motion to the haiku and "her ocean necklace" is delightfully suggestive. |
| Posted by Meagan Green on 08/18/07 at 06:38 AM awesome |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 08/18/07 at 09:49 PM hey, you DO know how to write literary haiku! whew! glad to have you in the Tadpole Society. i like the tumbliness and summerness of this one. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 08/20/07 at 07:54 PM really beautiful and well crafted! well done... |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 09/02/07 at 10:51 PM I especially like the image created--well done! |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 01/08/12 at 10:35 PM I am shocked to find I marked this as a favourite poem but failed to leave any comment. This is a lovely haiku though I have nothing uniquqe to add to the comments above. |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/01/13 at 09:36 PM Love this. You are so good at these! |
