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redefine: motive.
by Aaron Michaeli feel i need to
wrap my arms around a
patch of grass
and let the world
feel my heartbeat
just so she knows
i'm still alive. 08/16/2007 Posted on 08/17/2007
Copyright © 2024 Aaron Michael
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Meagan Green on 08/17/07 at 02:13 AM great poem and great title. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/17/07 at 02:25 AM I love the extremity of the concept of this, the all embracing exasperated urge of it, the surreal grasp, the mind and heart feels on the verge of holding, the wonderful "motive." |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/17/07 at 01:19 PM wonderful! |
| Posted by Maria Kintner on 08/18/07 at 01:00 AM This is so perfectly desperate and intense. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/19/07 at 09:04 PM Aaron, if it helps any, I'll hug a tree for you, since there's not too much grass where I'm at. I understand so well, the feeling of invisibility, and do I matter(?)
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/20/07 at 03:14 PM Letting the world know that there is a very special woman in your life. A poem at Pathetic.org as good as flying a hot-air ballon saying I love you! |
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