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Places
by Joe Cramer.....my place changes,
rearranges.....
meanders across the pages
of my life...
you know, it just isn't right.
and yet, I still try
to find my place.....
08/15/2007 Author's Note: I was re-reading e.e. cummings....
Posted on 08/15/2007
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/20/07 at 05:18 PM Outstanding, interesting, and clever arrangement. Yes, e.e. would be proud of you for emulating his style. And you do it so well.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 08/21/07 at 01:11 PM i liked this. few words, but such a message. |
| Posted by Rowan Luis on 11/11/07 at 04:45 PM first off, this made me smile. then it brought a tear to my eye because yes, i still keep trying to find my place. i found this on the randomizer thingy...thank you. i enjoyed darting around the screen with your words |
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