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the flip side of what we see

by Ava Blu



that’s what I want the love scenes in movies the poetry the characters leap off with only to hit the pavement
but they get up again
I did that last night I leapt into his arms kept him in my bed
all the wrong first moves because I can’t risk a second
he’s yet to call me back.



08/11/2007

Author's Note: truth doesn't seem to matter

Posted on 08/12/2007
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Matthew Sharp on 08/12/07 at 01:46 AM

seems so.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/09/08 at 07:37 PM

i've always made the wrong first move, but i never thought far enough ahead to even imagine a second...

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/05/09 at 03:47 PM

That last line shakes the bones, as any good last line should.

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