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Fluidity

by Britt Zimmerman

Fingers roam

along thighs

like valleys to the soul.

Hot like the desert,

breath upon hips.

In motion.

Sound waves,

like liquid

that melt in the mouth

and sing to the spine

08/10/2007

Posted on 08/10/2007
Copyright © 2024 Britt Zimmerman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 08/11/07 at 03:16 AM

"Sound waves, like liquid that melt in the mouth and sing to the spine"--I love that. Especially the last two lines. Just a great image.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 10/29/07 at 04:01 PM

britt this is almost too sexy! i love it!

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