| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/06/07 at 05:52 AM This goes beyond imagery and song with a brilliant intensity. There's a brave intimacy and honesty here, and the last line hits home, memorable and stunning. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/07/07 at 01:09 AM Powerful imagery and powerfully delivered. Your emphasis, fist, pulls in focus to the depths of human emotion, all the way to the last fragile ink. This poem is impossible not to remember. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/09/07 at 06:00 PM This is very visual and a strong message throughout. I like the how you repeat and emphasis your theme Fist...it packs a punch that is gut wrenching emotion and raw. smh |
| Posted by Matthew Sharp on 07/18/14 at 02:43 PM passionate... even the most delicate hand can become a destructive fist...
nicely expressed:) |
