Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 07/30/07 at 05:56 PM The undercurrents here are strong as well as the currents deep. I like especially the scribing of the boat--"its note" which I see as its course and its wake, breaking of the pristine still surface of water--even like a blank page, the poem begins. Also the "sleeping giants" which imply the potential held within the dawn, the lovers, the crags, the birds who break the air with flight, with swim, with sound. |