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pretty as you say
by Morgan D Hafelefuck the way you like it.
that's what i do... at least i try to,
but you never seem to care much
for anything... ever.
fuck the way you like it.
and so far as i can tell
which isn't far through this murky air
this relationship built on
spent lies and broken promises...
the rest will follow suite.
fuck the way you like it.
and maybe... you'll be happy... 07/19/2007 Author's Note: and maybe... if i'm lucky...
i can make you feel beautiful
Posted on 07/20/2007
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 07/23/07 at 11:35 PM Wow. This is incredible. You know I'm always a little bit envious of angsty love. I know better, but it doesn't stop me. Love the opening lines to each stanza; way to play with grammar! |
| Posted by Britt Zimmerman on 08/10/07 at 07:32 PM I like it! It's like angry agressive sex. But you know me, always thinking in the gutter ;) |
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