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something profound.
by Jared Fladelandi just wanna get myself
i just wanna get myself.
i just wanna get myself.
ahem.
i just wanna get myself her
i just wanna get myself herrt.
that's all I wanna do.
i just wanna get myself hurt. 07/14/2007 Posted on 07/14/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland
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| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/14/07 at 06:02 PM Jared, thank you for giving me my 2nd laugh of the day. Profound indeed...you funny guy. I love it. Reminds me of when the needle used to get stuck in the groove of a record.
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/14/07 at 06:46 PM I like the repetition. You really pull it off. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/31/07 at 12:51 AM Hahaha! Never saw the use of misspelling so cleverly used (herrt -- hurt). A humorous look at the timeless "mating" game. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/20/07 at 11:14 PM I finally found my way here...I love your wordart in this poem ;) very very very much. So much spaken with the curve of thought! :) |
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