Black Silence Tanka
by Tony Whitaker
World filled with silence
millions of years from today
no more spoken words
our utile tongue lost its way
once read a mind, we had sung
Posted on 06/28/2007
Copyright © 2021 Tony Whitaker
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by JD Clay on 07/09/07 at 05:44 PM|
I love philosophical poetry in any form and this one certainly cuts to the chase, Tony. The subtle impact of the last line makes it all come together. Congratulations on becoming The Telepathic Poet Of The Day.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 07/09/07 at 11:28 PM|
deep and ethereal • and I also especially like the last line • great poem of the day, mr telepathy! •
|Posted by A. Paige White on 07/22/07 at 11:48 PM|
How did I miss this? Oh, I see. That was the first day of my vacation... lol.. I was buried in a new book purchased just for the occasion. Darn shame I missed slapping you on the back. Belated Congrats!