Yes, comments of such sweetness from someone that leave you wanting more, as this poem does for me. Excellent!

Excellent analogy. Brief but potent!

I agree with Quentin. Doesn't waste words drawing out the metaphor...short sweet (pun intended) and to the point.

...mmm, ca. 1950: now that is good writing!, i mean in its simplicity of a real to life [gushy] moment, one so ephereal, 'tis nearly mist. so, the 50s comment is genuinely meant, it is so prescriptive of a [deliciously selfish] moment...i say touche!