Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/22/07 at 04:24 PM Light and humorous. A pleasant read. (My mother used to say, "wish in one hand and pee in the other and see which gets filled first!" LOL!!) |
Posted by Mara Meade on 06/22/07 at 09:41 PM I admit to Que's light chuckle, especially for "when I finished waiting." Amen, Brother Mike! You captured it well! |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/28/07 at 05:53 AM My kid friendly version - "Wish in one hand, air in the other...." LOL!!! I'm not done waiting. This was pretty precious, for a guy like you :-) |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/29/07 at 02:58 AM I like the "statue of limitations"--as if by your wish--those stones would turn into something beautiful--a statue of the desired, at least. Inventive and powerful, really! |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/10/08 at 12:27 AM May all of your wishes come true! I have a few rocks in the back yard...will have to try that one! |