Dimensional Splash

by Alisa Js

If I could pull back the veil of today
and invite you to join me for a dimensional splash,
We'd roll back the years, you and me
Experiencing newfound horizons ...

Imagine this!
Finding ourselves
In each others first kiss,
Untainted by life's cruel blows
and knock downs,
Leaving us stammering with such cynical eyes
Crushed hearts,
Battered souls
Weary no more
The world as our playground
Undaunted ...

What a glorious life we'd both know
If I only knew
What I didn't know then,
If only,
Two words that steal...


Posted on 06/19/2007
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 06/19/07 at 05:05 AM

But in that other dimension would you love this person you are with now the same? Probably not...the building blocks of who you are today makes the relationships better now because you find and stay friends and more with people that deserve and even earn that depth from you...~JPP

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 06/23/07 at 08:47 AM

Very philosophical in this piece. When I read your work it is like looking at the horizon and wondering what is on the other side. Thank you for sharing sweet Alisa.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/23/07 at 12:53 PM

"If" plays a prominent role in this poem. Philosophical, nostalgic.

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