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Sweet Dreams

by Jeffrey Parren

Candy coated dreams
Hot chocolate jobs
Strawberry existence

Like most things natural
their shelf life is limited
like fancy thoughts about hope

06/14/2007

Posted on 06/14/2007
Copyright © 2025 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/14/07 at 12:32 PM

The title is so fitting and the images are wonderful )if not delicious). The message here is well taken and true. Your economy of words makes for a very clear read- no confusion about your thoughts. Good job!

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