Aching by Alisa Js
It's lonely here without your presence
I miss the feel of 'us'
Our private conversations,
Torrid sessions
No one the wiser,
Except now, maybe me
The dream lives still ...
There are days I almost believe
You never left,
If I have all I need, then why do I still want?
Incredible as it may seem
I can't forget,
The seduction of your touch
06/07/2007 Posted on 06/08/2007 Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 06/08/07 at 09:12 AM I absolutely love the internal rhyme of that last line... the seduction of your touch! Ow!
Love ya! |
Posted by Jean Mollett on 06/23/07 at 10:50 PM Hi Alisa,
Great write. It's lovely, yet kinda sad too. Letting go of a love isn't easy. |
Posted by Steve Baba on 12/15/08 at 08:16 AM Great poem Alisa! I could relate. Excellent work... |
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