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Aching

by Alisa Js


It's lonely here without your presence
I miss the feel of 'us'
Our private conversations,
Torrid sessions
No one the wiser,
Except now, maybe me

The dream lives still ...

There are days I almost believe
You never left,
If I have all I need, then why do I still want?
Incredible as it may seem
I can't forget,
The seduction of your touch

06/07/2007

Posted on 06/08/2007
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 06/08/07 at 09:12 AM

I absolutely love the internal rhyme of that last line... the seduction of your touch! Ow! Love ya!

Posted by Jean Mollett on 06/23/07 at 10:50 PM

Hi Alisa, Great write. It's lovely, yet kinda sad too. Letting go of a love isn't easy.

Posted by Steve Baba on 12/15/08 at 08:16 AM

Great poem Alisa! I could relate. Excellent work...

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