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fastened

by A. Paige White

Fasting their way into the affluence
of the spiritually starved
but the fashionable
shaped by what pleases the eyes
and barely beating hearts
thoughts as empty of everlasting
as the kitchens of the poor
through no choice of their own.

they fasten their hopes on a horizon
growing ever dimmer
the grave our body's inevitable destination
Some graves still walk about
talking about
the fashions of the day
but what fastens to a soul
that fashions itself of miry clay?


06/04/2007

Author's Note: Spiritual death I would suppose

Posted on 06/05/2007
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/07 at 04:16 AM

I'd suppose, too. Loved this.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/06/07 at 01:51 AM

Most intriguing! A different way of looking at hypocrisy. The line about miry clay brought to mind the song lines, "He brought me out of the miry clay, He set my feet on the rock to stay. He puts a song in my soul today. A song of praise hallelujah." (He referring to Jesus of course.)

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/07/07 at 11:24 PM

They are likely to be some of the very people Jesus would try to reach and give an embrace of true love and a drink of Living Water.
(my first thoughts...)

; )

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