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Forever in June

by Mike Loftis

Forever in June

I’ll love you forever
her whispers sang
Sweat slicked bodies intertwined
Etched eternal in memory
Seven June still haunts my mind
Good-bye forever
her silence screamed
Angry eyes and then we part
Etched eternal in memory
30 June still breaks my heart

Mike Loftis

06/04/2007

Posted on 06/04/2007
Copyright © 2021 Mike Loftis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/07 at 02:59 AM

Man, do you send this sentiment home in great style. I really liked this.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/06/07 at 01:35 AM

You come back swinging! Quite an empahtic message in a short but compelling poem. Welcome back Mike.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/06/07 at 11:20 PM

Those moments that you speak of, it's like a psychic imprint that doesn't leave for a LONG time. I know. Hope it fades sufficiently in time.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/07/07 at 10:51 PM

How eerily strange -the way relationships can turn. And the clock stops in those moments and ticks away somewhere in our minds/heart-thumps...forever and ever...

The way you managed this poem? ómemorable and fine-tuned (in my humble!)
óJill

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/08/07 at 02:16 AM

Glad you found your muse Mike.....Charlie

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