| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/07 at 02:59 AM Man, do you send this sentiment home in great style. I really liked this. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/06/07 at 01:35 AM You come back swinging! Quite an empahtic message in a short but compelling poem. Welcome back Mike. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/06/07 at 11:20 PM Those moments that you speak of, it's like a psychic imprint that doesn't leave for a LONG time. I know. Hope it fades sufficiently in time. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/07/07 at 10:51 PM How eerily strange -the way relationships can turn. And the clock stops in those moments and ticks away somewhere in our minds/heart-thumps...forever and ever...
The way you managed this poem? �memorable and fine-tuned (in my humble!)
�Jill |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/08/07 at 02:16 AM Glad you found your muse Mike.....Charlie |
