|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/07 at 02:59 AM|
Man, do you send this sentiment home in great style. I really liked this.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/06/07 at 01:35 AM|
You come back swinging! Quite an empahtic message in a short but compelling poem. Welcome back Mike.
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/06/07 at 11:20 PM|
Those moments that you speak of, it's like a psychic imprint that doesn't leave for a LONG time. I know. Hope it fades sufficiently in time.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/07/07 at 10:51 PM|
How eerily strange -the way relationships can turn. And the clock stops in those moments and ticks away somewhere in our minds/heart-thumps...forever and ever...
The way you managed this poem? ómemorable and fine-tuned (in my humble!)
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/08/07 at 02:16 AM|
Glad you found your muse Mike.....Charlie