Gray by A. Paige White Thunder thickened air feel the weight on my skin and the frizzy of my hair shorted bursts of speed and shorter stops Three startling white feather sets circling twice and disappear really just disappear Step three steps left six steps right the building electric orchestra have swallowed them -vanished into thick air- tumbling into an esophagus by forked tongues licking like lightening I'm swallowed too. 06/04/2007 Author's Note: Summer storm practice via videosift.com Posted on 06/04/2007 Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Alisa Js on 06/04/07 at 11:06 PM Interesting imagery here... well done. aloha Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/05/07 at 03:42 AM I love that last line. Some of the most compelling and interesting imagery I've seen out of you. Posted by Alison McKenzie on 06/06/07 at 11:19 PM I love "vanished into thick air" and I LOVE the summer storms of thunder and lightening, though I doubt oregon is as dramatic as the south. Love this Paige....write more about summer storms, more!!!! Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/09/07 at 03:26 AM Electric imagery. Wish we'd get more t'storms or even rain here... When I was a kid, I remember how, just before a thunderstorm, the sky would turn this yellowish-gray. Excellent description, Paige. ~Chelle~ Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)