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river walk
by Rhyana Fisherwide ribbon of foggy blue
drifting between
graduating greens
a rippled road
climbing to forever
at the horizon line
but i am too heavy
only imagination
steps lightly enough
to travel that highway
into the sky
06/03/2007 Author's Note: an average bit of writing. traveling a considerable amount, drove over the tennessee river several times and it seemed like something that needed writing about.
Posted on 06/03/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhyana Fisher
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/04/07 at 03:44 AM And I think you did a good job of capturing it. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/10 at 10:27 AM I really liked this piece...the title drew me in, and the imagery found is picturesque...that first stanza feels like a scenic painting or photo of some small village highlands here in the UK...love where you take it, to the skies by the end...imagination indeed...kudos, peace, jewels |
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