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On Eagle's Wings
by Alisa Js
can we still have our September in May
if I get off my ass and do something
significant perhaps,
impressive even
and show you I still dare on a good day,
about those dreams we once shared
those plans we made,
when the world was our oyster, remember
it all began during the month of May ...
a quick glance in the mirror reveals
we still have time if we hurry,
before the next roll of rationalization
this notion of reason
or bleeding annotations ...
twenty four months, over seven hundred ways
how could you not impact my life, my very being
your essence unadulterated
eternally changes my everything,
a feather falls
and I wait on eagle's wings ...
05/31/2007 Posted on 06/01/2007
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 06/01/07 at 05:55 PM I need to read this again - but, as always a lovely write...shares a coconut, a nut, nut, a nut..* grin* loves, me, me..<--:) |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/20/07 at 11:21 PM ...alisaJ...yes even the mighty eagle has to lose a feather ever once in a while...lovely self-reflection of ---gettin off your arse---and make may be september...and try to hold what you once had and may have again...love the line breaks and different lined stanzas...you do write well on gutsy feelings...alisaj, i just been away from the 'puter for a while...i missed your posts annnnnnd been slow to arrest some words and put 'em down myself...but i'm gonna get back to it...peace, sweet thang...chaz |
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