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Aye Sea

by Maria Terezia Ferencz

We are only sea
drifting drops are people
generational waves our sea
we our only sea
shifting shapes of people
undulating anemones

see our only we
in waves of anonymity
surging currents of animosity
enemies aweigh futility

Aye Sea is as I see
all aweful humanity schooling
masses baited by awful reality
we rushing unendingly
roaring to deaths shore

05/31/2007

Author's Note: This is what I thought of while looking out at all the people at a concert last night.....

Posted on 05/31/2007
Copyright © 2020 Maria Terezia Ferencz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/31/07 at 01:28 PM

Wow! —so many incredible swerves with words, and much 20/20 vision! Your ending here is a stunning masterpiece!

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/31/07 at 07:44 PM

Must have been some pretty inspiring music, too. Very clever word use!

Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 06/01/07 at 07:55 AM

Great metaphor, Maria! And the unique wording makes you stop & contemplate. I love the image of the crowd of people swaying like anemones. And the ending is perfect. :)

Posted by Laura Doom on 06/03/07 at 12:31 AM

Fusion or depersonalization? A mesmeric ebb and flow swells the impression of inexorable motion towards the inevitable. Roughly translated...mmm. :)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/04/07 at 08:12 PM

Too true and very well said. Somehow poems come out of all kinds of situations. Glad you could see this insightful one when you were having fun.
~Chelle~

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