|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/31/07 at 01:28 PM|
Wow! —so many incredible swerves with words, and much 20/20 vision! Your ending here is a stunning masterpiece!
|Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/31/07 at 07:44 PM|
Must have been some pretty inspiring music, too. Very clever word use!
|Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 06/01/07 at 07:55 AM|
Great metaphor, Maria! And the unique wording makes you stop & contemplate. I love the image of the crowd of people swaying like anemones. And the ending is perfect. :)
|Posted by Laura Doom on 06/03/07 at 12:31 AM|
Fusion or depersonalization? A mesmeric ebb and flow swells the impression of inexorable motion towards the inevitable. Roughly translated...mmm. :)
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/04/07 at 08:12 PM|
Too true and very well said. Somehow poems come out of all kinds of situations. Glad you could see this insightful one when you were having fun.