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Weeds and Bushes
by Tony Whitakerweeds and bushes
hide their gaze
i wonder the size
fangs and eyes
beneath the leaves
to take their prey
by surprise
kill and survive
get caught and die
life in the woods
is cut and dry
05/29/2007 Posted on 05/30/2007
Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/30/07 at 02:31 AM Whew! And then there's the wildlife! ;-} Very starkly SSSSssss. Thanks for the reminder to watch better when I'm wandering around. I never think about it. I have no mercy with the shovel. None. |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 05/30/07 at 04:03 AM There's a story here, I know it. Tell me more. Good job. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/30/07 at 12:58 PM Wow! The succintness of this somehow adds to the sense of peril. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 06/03/07 at 03:00 AM Very descriptive and real.. aloha |
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