I'm in so much love, and it does'nt show. by Johnny Crimsoni'm all set up for science
down here
another day of nagging
at my cock
Still parading you around
like you're worth it
Your insides would make right angles
of any stick or pole
I slowly impaled you on
And all your blood
would laugh at my efforts
I have to hand it to your girl
You have a miserable head
on your shoulders
King Henry and I were
hoping to remedy this
When you squeeze that skin together
this liquid will come out
I want you to swallow 2 tablespoons
and dont call me in the morning
I dont know a single thing about
screaming
I've duct tape the ears of all
Miles down the winding shut up
Voices are raspy when
everyone's listening
and headphones will do you good in traffic
We've sistered the bad ones
and symbiotically fused our heads
to retarded twins
The hills roll forever in the morning
Sometimes I forget what crops
we even grow out there
Mama bes be gettin home soon
Daddy done shot sister
and then himself
Reckon i'll fetch booger and write mama a note
Mom daddy done killed lula
and took his own
Bobby and me don't like your cookin
and who's going to touch us now
headed for New York
Love james
Booger get your fingers out your mouth
and tell me again what your gonna
tell the cops
when they ask
why my fingerprints
are all over mommas 45
05/28/2007 Posted on 05/28/2007 Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson
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Posted by Anne Boulender on 05/28/07 at 07:37 AM Probably the only thing ladylike about me is that I hate mentions to bodily fluids (other than blood and sometimes that xxx stuff is ok) and the like, but i'll give you a pass on that one here. just because you completely change directions here. this is totally insane, but its pretty clever too. "still parading you around like you're worth it/I have to hand it to your girl/
You have a miserable head
on your shoulders/
King Henry and I were
hoping to remedy this/
When you squeeze that skin together
this liquid will come out/
I want you to swallow 2 tablespoons/
and dont call me in the morning/" that is so bang on to me. i like the part about the rolling hills and the crops too. and the letter and mama's 45. poor lula. man i wish i wrote this myself.
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Posted by Nanette Bellman on 11/28/08 at 03:33 AM i like this...but...i'm not uber crazy when the whole mama thing came in. just being honest with you. but lots of classic lines. |
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