Ye Senses by Rebecca LinChild! I yelled
and picked up the small girl I was looking after into my lap.
Maybe her parents did not pay me for worldly advice,
but I felt the need to leave my mark:
There comes a time
when logic goes down the drain,
justice is barely visible (hidden behind closed bars)
and you can no longer romanticize your reality.
Chivalry is dead
dont cha know?
Oh, Ive tried to move on,
tried to accept and repent.
Whatever emotion left over is usually regret.
Its impossible for me to sink in mindless monotony
without losing part of my sanity.
Time wont budge when you need it to,
people dont help when you want them to care
the places you hate hold you firm
when theres freedom in the air.
When I cant collect my baggage, I collect my thoughts
in the natural environment
where Im not trapped
by obligations, unnecessary pressure or angst.
Let me say,
you definitely need to rethink your existence
when all your conflicts are unnecessary!
Try it, please do,
meditate and allow for compromise.
Find a place:
a little cemetery from two hundred or two years ago,
or a barely lit church basement will suffice.
Do not allow yourself to be
stifled (especially by those you love).
I say this only because I know.
Lately, thats all I know.
Its a freakish frustration;
like being an artist
trying to draw grotesque images that personify your rage,
but all that flows are cheery colors,
hearts and stars
under a false pretense!
Or perhaps its similar to being a new priest
in a disillusioned and disappointed congregation.
While youre reading a contemporary verse of a scripture,
their piercing, bitter voices
overpower you with the traditional one
But remember what God said
The first will be last.
So gather ye senses while ye may
for time will surely flow
and the people you trusted to be friends
wont hesitate to go.
I looked down at the child
only to find that her little blue eyes, just like mine,
were veiled behind tired lids.
She had fallen asleep,
with her little head lying on my chest.
I guess my words hadnt touched her
as much as my own heartbeat.
05/23/2007 Author's Note: Eh I wrote this one for a contest. It's all right. I wanted to put it on here after it was over. Turns out a guy I know won it.
Posted on 05/23/2007 Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Lin
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by A. Paige White on 05/24/07 at 12:21 AM I think it's just awesome! The way you ended it was a smooth slide into "you can no longer romanticize your reality." But you showed by your words that sometimes nearness or a hug can soothe the world of a trusting child. Beautiful.
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Posted by Max Phineas on 05/24/07 at 03:49 AM Ooh I thought I saw this before, haha. Guess I did. Still love it! And still think it deserved #1. <3 |
Posted by Laura Doom on 05/26/07 at 12:28 AM Ha!...yes. *child-like smile* |
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