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Odd Couple

by Bruce W Niedt

 He's so slow and she's so fast,
 They're opposites, one may presume.
 So will this marriage ever last?
 
 Methodical, he's fly-fish-cast;
 She sweeps like a brand-new broom.
 His style is slow, while hers is fast.
 
 He's half-done the night's repast,
 When she clears dishes from the room.
 How can this marriage ever last?
 
 He measures twice, with notes amassed;
 She's kitchen-sink and sonic-boom.
 He takes life slow; she likes it fast.
 
 Her fuse is short, his patience vast;
 They were not knit from common loom.
 Why should this marriage ever last?
 
 And how much time together passed?
 Sixty years as bride and groom.
 She loves him slow; he loves her fast.
 They made this marriage ever-last.

05/22/2007

Author's Note: [First published in Sunken Lines, Winter 2005.]

Posted on 05/23/2007
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 05/23/07 at 05:03 AM

Compromise is the key. :) Even though she was fast, she loved him slow - just as he needed. And where he was slow, he loved her fast - just as she needed. The yin & yang come together to create the whole. Nicely done, Bruce.

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