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Sail Upon My Magic Sea of Sound by Tony Whitakermy magic box
of frets and strings
plucking leads
from scales
into a wall
of sound
which cantonate
with chords
to fill these
flowing trails
a melody
emergent majors
stow the weight
minors and sevenths
carry the wind
a sail of song
each stroke of string
upon uncharted seas
I see the shore
the tune is done
I belt-out and christen
a ~new~ song cast off
asea with you
05/22/2007
Author's Note: I love my guitar. She is my real mistress....
Posted on 05/22/2007 Copyright © 2026 Tony Whitaker
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 05/23/07 at 05:12 AM My brother is teaching himself to play. We've been listening to him pluck the famous chords of Iron Man for the last 2 weeks. ;) I really like the 2nd stanza of this piece. It has a great flow. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 05/26/07 at 08:12 PM Music like love is endless. Beautiful rendition, here.. aloha. |
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