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The Cruel Fates

by Jim Benz

A man walks into an uptown wine bar,
looks around for a place to sit
but sees only a single chair available
amidst three women at a small table
in the middle of the room.

He’s had a long day selling furniture,
so he works his way through the crowd
then politely asks the women if he can join them
for a single glass of red wine.

They stare at him with probing eyes
and say nothing.

He explains how crowded the bar is,
how he’s been on his feet most of the day,
how he wants nothing more
than a good glass of Cabernet
and a friendly place to rest his feet
before catching the bus home.

He punctuates each point
of his speech with a slight,
unconscious shrug, as if to emphasize
every thought.

They still say nothing.

He arches his eyebrows and smiles
sheepishly, wondering,
“What’s up with these ladies?”

Finally, the woman directly across the table
from where he stands, takes off her glasses,
sets them on the table and looks him in the eye,
saying, “I’ll carry you in my womb, give you birth,
but I will never suckle you.”

His smile fades into a look of puzzlement.

He begins to open his mouth in reply
but the second woman, to his right,
looks him in the eye and says,
“I’ll keep you fed and clothed all the days of your life,
but I will never weep for your hardship.”

The man’s mouth hangs open until she finishes,
then it closes and he says nothing.

Before he can look at the woman to his left,
she leans forward across the table
turns her head slightly and says,
“I’ll wash your body, dress it for the grave,
but I will never mourn your passing.”

The man thinks to himself, “This is too much,”
and begins to turn away, feeling more confused
than rejected.

But before he leaves,
the first woman speaks again, saying,
“Please, join us.”

He’s completely taken by surprise.

He turns back to the table, hesitates a moment,
then pulls out a chair and sits down.

The women stare into his eyes,
examining his expression
of total discomfort.

Each of them smiles politely,
almost apologetic.

He’s nervous now, thinking to himself
how two glasses of wine would be better
than one, and better enjoyed on his feet
somewhere in a corner, somewhere
far from this table.

He tries to return their smiles,
but finds himself blushing under the scrutiny
of now friendly eyes.

A waiter comes to the table,
glances at the man, then asks the women,
“Will there be anything else?”

“Yes. Bring a bottle,” the first woman says,
“make it a Cabernet, whatever is least expensive.
And please, bring another glass.”

After a short, uncomfortable wait,
the waiter returns, bearing a bottle
and a fourth glass.

The second woman picks up the bottle
and pours wine into the new glass,
sliding it across the table to the man.

He picks it up cautiously and takes a sip.

“It’s very good,” he says, brightening
a little, but then, unexpectedly from behind,
someone bumps into the back of his chair
and he spills wine
down the front of his white shirt.

It spreads quickly,
forming a deep red blotch
across the middle of his chest.

He forgets about the three women
and pushes his chair back from the table,
throws his arms away from his body,
lowers his head and watches
the stain spread.

Beneath the shirt, his skin feels wet
and sticky.

He looks up, agitated.

The women are gone. There is no bar.
He’s standing in the middle of a dark road
watching headlights grow brighter
than anything he’s seen before. He becomes
light-blind, sensing only the long, mournful blast
of an air horn changing pitch, growing louder,
deeper.

No one screams.

05/21/2007

Posted on 05/21/2007
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laura Doom on 05/23/07 at 09:56 AM

Entertaining whole, but as ever, I'm obssessed with detail...for instance, the opening line, classic stand-up territory, but for modified location, suggesting this is not destined to be three rounds and a punch-line. Also, the shrugs which emphasise [each thought], which, in the context, suggest self-consciousness and possibly apology rather than justification - as a contrast to the [almost] 'apologetic' fates...ha! Does fate apologise for itself?
(Still pondering 'selling furniture/single chair available' - much to exercise this imagination here)

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 05/31/07 at 07:16 PM

straight to my favorites.

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