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by Jim Benz

Ever the optimist,
Ronnie looked at the extra parts
Resting in a pile
On the garage floor and said,
Relax, it’ll run just fine.

05/21/2007

Posted on 05/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laura Doom on 05/23/07 at 09:18 AM

No auto-correction facility then? So, apart from the obviously subtle humour, I'm taken (apart) by the image of spared parts resting, in recovery following mechanical trauma :)

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 07/15/10 at 02:18 PM

:D

Posted by Stuart Shilton on 01/07/11 at 09:56 PM

take out the puntuation and grammar and it runs just fine reminds me of my dad...

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