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"Kaleidoscope"
by Max PhineasI watched you
Watch the world
And wondered what you saw out there
And wondered what you saw in me
To make you stay.
In a breaths span
You bridged the gap between
The heavens and my soul.
And spanned the distance between
Reality and fantasy.
Your canvas bag of magic
Must have played quite the trick
For you to see me the way you do.
But as for me
I see you through a kaleidoscope
Fragmented, distorted
Beautiful. 05/08/2007 Author's Note: Not one of my favorites from the Portfolio bunch, but I'm not aiming for perfection with all of them. Unfortunately, I don't have that time to afford.
Posted on 05/20/2007
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas
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| Posted by Jean Mollett on 05/20/07 at 04:48 AM Hi Cole,
It's not bad at all. it's good. Kaleidoscope, it does have different shapes and colors. It's a different way of describing the love between you too. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/20/07 at 12:37 PM "You bridged the gap between
The heavens and my soul."
Is a beautiful capture, to me, of the physical and spiritual union of two lovers. It beautifully captures all the many fragmented light and dark moments we all experience in this adventure we call love.
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| Posted by Rebecca Lin on 05/21/07 at 11:29 PM I think this is a pretty one as well. |
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