| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 05/16/07 at 04:32 PM To have a love that makes time stop to the point that you only realize the existence of one another. What a wonderful scene and the word usage and flow are excellent, like always. ~JPP |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/17/07 at 12:00 PM I love this and....thats all I can think of to say right now. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/20/07 at 01:10 PM I love this. My sweetheart is more humid than our summer heat and if you've ever experienced Mississippi in the summer you'll know how legendary that pronouncement, lol. He radiates more humidity than the beach of Biloxi than July at high noon. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 05/21/07 at 03:49 PM Well, I succumbed to the soporific swell - and was amused by 'fast asleep', which could be read in any direction, though I favour the unconscious abstinence interpretation :) |
