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This is It

by Trisha De Gracia

The stories of forgotten
drenched in seasons of our absences
the chill of foreheads pressed on panes of glass
the autumn leaves

And still I marvel at your courage
maiming crowbars one by one
in vain to find the smile you lost
between these cherub's lips

05/10/2007

Posted on 05/10/2007
Copyright © 2024 Trisha De Gracia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 05/11/07 at 11:07 AM

You speak much in eight little lines - poignant and excellent (I liked the part about the crowbar best) - very well done.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/12/07 at 08:03 AM

"maiming crowbars..." stunning writing and I can feel the frustration. Super piece Trisha!

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