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Achilles Hill

by A. Paige White





My mind is my only achilles heel
Well maybe too, I think, how I feel






Summoning the sum of the summit
Wit escapes on some slide
 So
  I
   p
    l
     u
      m
       m
        e
         t

Until I cross some remarked border
on my knees

04/23/2007

Author's Note:

... and oh, how thankful I am for the <-{ bows }-> of covenant that have targeted me and mine...

Posted on 04/24/2007
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/28/07 at 01:40 AM

Hmmm in poetry you can get away with changing metaphors in the middle! LOL! Clever! Of course the title ties the concepts together.

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