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Love Lost
by Jeffrey ParrenI gathered what was left
After once again I was right
She was honest
Her love was counterfeit
Towards my being
Which is now nothingness.
She erased the lyrics
Now I see my imprint
How big an impression
Today her disassociation
The phone did not ring
Watch how I disappear. 04/21/2007 Author's Note: See if you can figure out the (kinda) form I used.
Posted on 04/21/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 04/21/07 at 06:53 PM I have no idea what "form" but, I liked it a lot! I read it twice! I loved this one line "She was honest
Her love was counterfeit"..it is a stand alone moment of truth. Vivid! |
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