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What the Haystacks Find

by Nicole Assenza

my secrets to you ARE
confessions of
every kind,
every
other
line--
dropping pins and knives;

AND I’ve been a snake before--
can’t deny,
I need to shed my sin

my secrets to you are confessions of every kind
and I lie like the dogs
(you’ll always kick aside)

haystacks find pins and knives
bleed the one
who’s left them behind

regret’s the big hand,
flails backwards, melts
with no reward

04/17/2007

Author's Note: Now you only talk to your current therapist, which I'm not.

Posted on 04/17/2007
Copyright © 2025 Nicole Assenza

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Butcher on 04/18/07 at 07:07 PM

this poem has great rhythm and flow. i really enjoyed reading it.

Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 06/15/07 at 03:52 PM

Excellent metaphor for regret - quite true. Great poem too; I like stanza three best, with the confessions of every kind and the kicking aside of the lying dogs... Very nice. ;)

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