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paperboat
by Jared Fladelandlife is a paper bag
thrown in the wind
rained upon
slowly ripped apart by everything
until it disintegrates into nothing
back into the earth. 04/10/2007 Posted on 04/10/2007
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 04/10/07 at 02:52 PM this is just depressing. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/11/07 at 04:18 AM i guess it's all in how yo look at it... i don't think it's depressing... for what it's worth... |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 04/14/07 at 12:33 AM Another version of the circle of life, no? That's what I see anyway ;)
Much love -Kat. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 06/15/07 at 01:29 AM Strong analogy! Brevity emphasizes the message. Pessimistic (though you may say realistic). |
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