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Blurring
by Joe CramerSuch a delicate flower, revealing
Soft and lovely, fragrant,
Alluring and appealing.
It is all I could ever want
Need or even hope to have now.
You are such a beauty, alluring
That I miss you so much and how
All my thoughts are blurring. 04/09/2007 Posted on 04/09/2007
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/10/07 at 03:37 AM I love this, but have one suggestion - delete the period after "how," so that it flows into the next line. YOW! this must be some woman. It must be nice to have a guy write romantic poetry all the time.
~Chelle~ |
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