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Entwined

by Anita Mac

We were walking
handinhand
dancing
like strangers
on an all too Familiar night.

04/08/2007

Posted on 04/08/2007
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Brian Francis on 04/08/07 at 11:33 PM

Very nice imagery. Remainds me of how a relationship can become a all too convient when passion is lost. --bf

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/09/07 at 06:00 AM

the familiarity makes me wonder if it was really a good thing because more often then not, at least in my experience, it leads to bad things. beautiful poem though. i'm sorry if i'm being a downer... like i said, it's been a weird day.

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