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by Emily Davidson

he says
the temptation is too great
and that i should leave
right
now
before it gets any worse

but i plead,
"just one kiss
goodbye?"

he responds,
"no. because if we kiss,
it won't be goodbye...
it'll be hello."

04/08/2007

Posted on 04/08/2007
Copyright © 2025 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 04/09/07 at 05:55 AM

I think a bit of us know what this situation is about since we have experienced a type of it before. Sometimes leaving is best, or worst. I think I covered all grounds. Great little ditty. ~JPP

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 04/11/07 at 05:36 PM

Great write

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