| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/06/07 at 06:17 AM Sometimes the price seems right, doesn't it? |
| Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 04/06/07 at 02:42 PM Yes it seems those sweets are still worth it after all that can happen. ~JPP |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/28/07 at 01:25 PM A poem definitely with individual interpretation! The "sweets of night" a significant analogy for temptations that giving into could destroy the soul! "What does it profit a man if he should gain the whole world and lose his own soul?" (Jesus speaking.) |
| Posted by Deborah Breuer on 06/04/07 at 04:30 AM It's worth much more some nights. But on an evening when the air is hot and anything seems possible, attainable, and within reach...A soul is all one has to give and so we give it. Wilingly and happily. You write it well. Congrats |
