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Spiraling

by Joe Cramer

I feel my life...

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                              out of control

it's as if I

                    have no Soul

   so instead I watch

                      my face, my hands, my eyes

Just getting old.

I am no longer bold...

 

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Out of control.

04/02/2007

Author's Note: Some days are good.... others better... and yet other days.....

Posted on 04/02/2007
Copyright © 2026 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/02/07 at 02:52 PM

Exactly. Very, very clever stuff here. Really well done.

Posted by Sarah Graves on 04/03/07 at 05:13 AM

What an original style you have here. This is my first time reading your work I believe..and I'm glad I stumbled across this :) This life gives us something different everyday..great read! :)

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