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by Olivia Weinkein

words are a
whisper i forgot to mention
did we really need to go so
far so fast i though i was one
place woke up in another
a vicious motion of madness
i just can't quite grasp
spinning in circles standing
right here following their foot-
steps with the soles of my
eyes i never could understand
the pain of trying to remember
or the guilt that comes after
when you wish you never had

03/30/2007

Author's Note: it's been awhile.

Posted on 03/30/2007
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/30/07 at 05:57 AM

and when it all comes down to it... what's the difference? great read, thank you for sharing.

Posted by Lauren Singer on 03/31/07 at 01:15 AM

so glad to see you posting again. a gem.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/31/07 at 12:25 PM

found my way here through another poet's poem....glad i did. enjoyable read.

Posted by Matthew Sharp on 04/02/07 at 04:29 AM

i guess a one night stand is just a short relationship. awesome work:)

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