| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 03/29/07 at 05:15 PM This is a wonderful poem, a "tethering" poem, which itself is like a strand, a beam at sunset connecting earth to sky through sea. I love the "pinkening" delightful and fully expressive, inventive, adding a lightness and just the right color motion. Also the "shingle" shore is fantastic...as it leaves you out on a (sea floor) shore extension into the depths... and yet rings of "single" (two as one) and the "gull" in its own (similar singleness) "ponders" as you imply-- both you two and the sky... |
